Well done!!! You have so many great ideas. If I were to pick only one is going to be #7. i like the combination of black and burgundy. I like how you have A and also Adobe kind of ghosted out. it has added richness to your design. I like the placement of the logo and also the type on top. Good job overall.
I like 5 and 16 because of the color spectrum, maybe it would look better on 5 if CS5 didn't cover the art. I would think of a better way to integrate the CS5 logo with the graphics. Maybe have CS5 in a giant size and use it as a clipping mask.
i think the ones in the second to last column...all of them work really well. i like how you used orange blue and purple icons. my favorite is the two on the bottom in the second to last column! really cool and professional and eycatching
I choose #17. The effect you created with the colors seem to add a sense of balance in the composition. I think it would be nice to see a little bit of reflection on CS5 coming from the colors.
I like 16, and 17 the most because I like how you designed the colors with the CS5 it looks cool but still needs work. The rest of your designs just look to outdated and retro to me but good job and keep going at it..
#15 is coming along quite nice. For #15, it could work better if the flower is brought out more. It gets lost with the black background. CS5 is oddly placed and would look better if it was juxtaposed with the main type.
#16 & 17 could work also. They both have a great color spectrum. For #16, maybe you can stretch the colors out so that they would bleed off the page/package. #17 could be better executed if there was a better integration between CS5 and the colors.
#5. #10, #15 most dimensional version you have. this is some of the best work youy have turned in for one of my classes. its a great progression of thoguht and execution. i would like to see how these translate to the individual boxes for each program. what do you replace the pinwheel with that still has depth and color?
I like no.6 and no.7. Simple and clean design but it speaks something. Other pieces look good visually but just not interesting. They have some really flashy look but it doesn't make you deep impressions.
Well done!!! You have so many great ideas. If I were to pick only one is going to be #7. i like the combination of black and burgundy. I like how you have A and also Adobe kind of ghosted out. it has added richness to your design. I like the placement of the logo and also the type on top. Good job overall.
ReplyDeleteI like 3 and 4, Maybe you can try not putting CS5 directly in the middle. Maybe you can also try making CS5 more integrated.
ReplyDeleteI feel like everything is too large on the layout. I think its too many elements all on top of each other like that. I think its not clear enough yet.
ReplyDeleteI like 5 and 16 because of the color spectrum, maybe it would look better on 5 if CS5 didn't cover the art. I would think of a better way to integrate the CS5 logo with the graphics. Maybe have CS5 in a giant size and use it as a clipping mask.
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i think the ones in the second to last column...all of them work really well. i like how you used orange blue and purple icons. my favorite is the two on the bottom in the second to last column! really cool and professional and eycatching
ReplyDeleteI choose #17. The effect you created with the colors seem to add a sense of balance in the composition. I think it would be nice to see a little bit of reflection on CS5 coming from the colors.
ReplyDeleteI like 16, and 17 the most because I like how you designed the colors with the CS5 it looks cool but still needs work. The rest of your designs just look to outdated and retro to me but good job and keep going at it..
ReplyDelete#15 is coming along quite nice. For #15, it could work better if the flower is brought out more. It gets lost with the black background. CS5 is oddly placed and would look better if it was juxtaposed with the main type.
ReplyDelete#16 & 17 could work also. They both have a great color spectrum. For #16, maybe you can stretch the colors out so that they would bleed off the page/package. #17 could be better executed if there was a better integration between CS5 and the colors.
Overall, great variations in comps. =)
Sarom R.
#5. #10, #15
ReplyDeletemost dimensional version you have. this is some of the best work youy have turned in for one of my classes. its a great progression of thoguht and execution. i would like to see how these translate to the individual boxes for each program. what do you replace the pinwheel with that still has depth and color?
I like no.6 and no.7. Simple and clean design but it speaks something. Other pieces look good visually but just not interesting. They have some really flashy look but it doesn't make you deep impressions.
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